Y-souls Temptation part 1

I planned to do 4 pages per 1 part, so next week I will update another 2 finished pages to this post again

update 1: Ah!! I just thought that I must get the April reward finished first, and then I will continue this work with no worry. Sorry for the sudden pause. TwT

update 2: This week has been horrible, full of bad events like my cat went missing, and my BF caught the flu with a high fever. I can't concentrate on my work at all, and I need to spend time finding my cat and taking care of my boyfriend. However, everything is settled down. My cat has come back, and my BF is getting better. I really apologise for the slow progess, I will try to finish this part soon.

// I revised all texts, because I want to improve the feeling a bit more. >w<