Force of Nature P14 +WIPs

Really like how the different lights turned out on this page. My biggest struggle are always the lines with comics. I either make them to thin or to unclean looking. But I like them on this page.

 The next page has a snake in it (as you can see in the sketch) But I'm thinking of changeing it into another animal since we already had a big snake shot. Maybe a marten since the size would fit into it.