The Dropouts | Page 49 | Draft

I'm sure it triggers something primal in us all; the memory of an approaching parent when you're doing something you don't want to get caught doing!This is a page from a much earlier draft where Tony had a stutter. The dialogue needs work but I think it conveys the idea well enough. I've debated whether or not to show these earliest drafts or the cleaned up version, but I've decided to show the first draft so you can see how the idea progresses from its most awkward nascent stage! ALSO, I apologize but there is no timelapse for page 48! I imported a bunch of CSP pages and the imported pages didn't have timelapse turned on, which I didn't notice until I'd finished that last page. I'll correct that going forward!