Tips and Hips Part 2 "Pitch"

As an artist you see a lot of things that no one else will see, and if someone see they really won't care - however, I've been stuck with the composition and poses for Tips and Hips Part 2.

I'm mostly happy with the pose on the right but the left I've thrown so much away but this pose seems redeemable - I just want some feedback about this so far...

I hate to spoil Tips and Hips Part 2 but I feel it is way overdue and you all want to see it so badly so I thought I'd ask for your feedback - should I keep going because no one cares and it looks fine, should I tweak the pose just a bit or redraw it all together?